2012년 5월 15일 화요일

The effects of diet.

 Nowadays,  many people think about their health. Diet is one of the good ways to healthy. There are many good effects of diet. Steady diet can make people slim. If fat people change into slim, lowers the risk of developing many diseases. Also, they can buy pretty clothes fit the body. Then,  the appearance is even prettier, and even attract more opposite sex. In conclusion, diet enhances the quality of people's happiness.

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  1. You give good effects, and you have a great concluding sentence.

    Writing tips:
    Be sure to capitalize the important words of the title: The Effects of Diet
    Also, no . in the title.

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